Squash in Egypt

Wrestlemania will use a opening then it slowly does what the nWo’s theme does before the actual song starts. Then it will show TNA videos, and Promos. Mentioning an invasion a year earlier which stopped at the bash for a few months with betrayals from CM Punk, and other former TNA superstars when the Mastermind A.J. Styles interfered, and ruined the rumble match. Showing that he claimed WWE will fall at the hands of TNA.
1. MITB: TNA Reps: Rob Van Dam Vs Jeff Hardy Vs The Pope Dinaglo Dinero Vs CM Punk Vs Christian. Vs (WWE Reps) Matt Hardy Vs Jack Swagger Vs Kofi Kingston Vs The Miz Vs John Morrison
Winner: The Pope Dianglo Dinero 23:47
The Pope Celebrates, and leaves as Jeff Hardy, Christian, and Rob Van Dam congratulate him as he is interviewed by Christy Hemme.
2. WWE Tag title & TNA Tag Title TLC Match: Beer Money Inc. Vs Motor City Machine Guns Vs The Hart Dynasty Vs Drew McIntyre, and Sheamus
Winners: Drew McIntyre, and Sheamus 18:23
After Drew McIntyre, and Sheamus win they coin a new tag team name the say TNA
is dead meat
3. Steel Asylum Match for the X-Division title: Shannon Moore Vs Amazing Red Vs The Brian Kendrick Vs Rey Mysterio Vs Evan Bourne Vs Yoshi Tatsu 23:24
Winner: Yoshi Tatsu gaining a Mid-Carder push
After the win TNA’s X-Division superstars walk out, and yell at Shannon Moore, Amazing Red, and The Brian Kendrick then they leave.
4. World Heavyweight Championship Submission match: Chris Jericho Vs Kurt Angle
Winner: Kurt Angle
After Kurt Angle wins multiple TNA Superstars run out hand him a flag with the TNA logo on it rise him up as he waves the flag celebrating. Afterward Kurt Angle grabs a mircophone, and says "TNA now has the upper hand in this war. However AJ Styles you are the last piece of the puzzle! In order to prove TNA is better then WWE you must defend the TNA championship, and gain WWE’s biggest prize AJ The fate of TNA is in your hands".
5. TNA Knockouts, and WWE Divas, and Womens championship fatal four-way match: Madison Raine Vs Angelina Love Vs Michelle McCool Vs Maryse
Winner: Angelina Love 5:12
After the win the rest of the beautiful people walk out, and celebrate with Angelina Love booting out Madison Raine.
6. TNA Global, and WWE U.S Title match: Rob Terry Vs Vladimir Kozlov
Winner: Rob Terry 12:14
Rob Terry celebrates then Vladimir Kozlov gets up, and extends his hand, and Rob Terry accepts, but then they are attacked by TNA superstars who say "Are you stupid Rob? You were told that TNA takes no prisoners, that sportsmanship not only disgraced TNA, but showed a sign of weakness. Let this be a lesson Rob"
7. The Big Three Matches, Match 1: John Cena Vs Sting in a Extreme Rules Match
Winner: Sting thanks to a hit off Cena’s head with a Barbwire bat 18:48
Sting starts to attack Cena with the bat then puts his head with the post on one side before Sting swings the back then the Nexus theme starts, and they save Cena then Wade Barrett says "Cena we didn’t save you we saved WWE whether or not we like you or the fans do you are important to stopping TNA whether or not we win tonight TNA won’t give up that easily we need all the help we can get so Cena don’t get used to us being nice to you.
8. The Big Three Matches, Match 2: Edge, and Randy Orton Vs Matt Morgan, and Hernandez
Winner: Edge, and Orton 19:28
After Edge,and Orton win they start celebrating then in mid celebration Orton RKO’s Edge then grabs a microphone, and says. "I’m on to you Edge you thought I wouldn’t catch on nice try, but I know full well you weren’t with WWE I saw you talking to Hulk Hogan, and Dixie Carter. If you want to turn your back on the company that made you fine squash this, but trust me as long as I’m in this ring… that won’t happen".
9. The Big Three Matches, Match 3 For the WWE, and TNA Titles Last man Standing: AJ Styles Vs Undertaker
Winner: Undertaker 37:42
In mid-match Chris Jericho interferes, and uses the codebreaker on Undertaker. Then at nine as AJ Styles believes he won for TNA, and ended the streak Undertaker gets up with his dead man alive taunt, and brutally attacks AJ Styles. Then Undertaker sets up AJ Styles, and Tombstones him through the announce table, and wins. Becoming 20-0
What do you think?

1.7.6
2.7.5
3.7.3
4.8.3
5.6.2
6.5.2
7.9.6
8.8.2
9.8.3

1.i think all your promos are good the MITB maybe 20:12 the longest MITB is like around 17:00 Minutes
2.Not bad i think that that will not happen becuase if TNA lost a title that would be bad but good Match
3.not total liking Yoshi Winning but good Match
4.Cooooooooool Match!
5.don’t like Diva Macthes but i guess you have to put them some were
6.Vladmir Kozlov Hate him and he has had no good Matches
7.Awsome Match the crowd will go wild because Kozlov they mite say Boring and when they see this Match they will go wild!!
8.not Bad
9Cool Match

PS.I hope one Day that WWE and TNA have a PPV togeter people have bin talking about it for ageses and i thin k they will never do it but i hope they do!

the best Match Number7
the worst Match was Number6
you should of put Jeff Hardy and Mr. Anderson(called the Enigmatic Assholes ) against Randy Orton and Edge
OVERALL: 76.2/100

in my book that is prety Good would love to see some off those Matches some other not really!!

As Max looked further ahead he, surprisingly, saw his best friend, Sean, under the market tent. Max sped up his pace. Sean was the oldest of the four friends, all of them around the age of seventeen, – Max, Miranda, Jess. Sean always made the final decision in everything he did, whether it was with his friends or at an important meeting. This was because every word that came out of his mouth was so convincing. For this reason, people sometimes called him “chief.” Even some of the classmates would look up to him. One time in class Noah announced that there would be a new lesson coming up involving how to survive in the wilderness, but as group (the entire class). Noah proclaimed that survival was all about teamwork and keeping things under control. Sean was chosen to be the leader in the group, which meant he was in charge of who got firewood and who would set up the tent.
“Hey chief!” Max shouted, while he waved from a couple feet away. Sean raised his battered farming hat and smiled. He wore a white linen tunic with a brown belt that held his sheath and supplies, such as knives and flint. “Max, how’s it going? Are you going to the lesson today?” he asked as he eyed down toward the stand, searching for the ripest butternut squash the market had to offer.

First thing first: please press the return button every once in a while, especially on your dialogue.
Get rid of useless words that add nothing to the dialogue, like "as," and be careful with your commas. As usual, I edited it below.

Max looked further ahead and saw his best friend, Sean, under a market tent, surprisingly enough. (why is this so surprising? And if you have already introduced Sean, just put his name, not the whole best friends thing.) He sped up his pace to go join Sean in whatever he was doing.
Sean was the oldest of Max and his friends (maybe clique, cronies, etc. This feels very awkward to me.), though all of them were around seventeen. (introduce the girls later. They are unimportant for now. Also- how old are you? A lot of the things that they do and how they act haven’t made me peg them as seventeen. I will admit that I originally thought they were twelve to fifteen.) Sean was a very deciding person, and when they needed a decision made, the other three would turn to him. (You give us something to look forward to- other characters, just in case we don’t like Sean and Max. Also, you are somewhat telling and not showing. Just an observation. Like what does he look like? I say he sounds blonde, medium green-ish (grass or leaves filled with water) or dark blue eyes(oceans or nighttime skies) and light brown or sandy blonde hair. And max sounds like a green or black eyed, black haired guy.)
He had a way of making the words he spoke sound very convincing. Because of this talent, people close to him called Sean “Chief.” Even some of the classmates would look up to him.(this sentence makes no sense to me, sorry.)
One time in class Noah announced that there would be a new lesson coming up involving how to survive in the wilderness, but as group (the entire class). Noah proclaimed that survival was all about teamwork and keeping things under control. Sean was chosen to be the leader in the group, which meant he was in charge of who got firewood and who would set up the tent. (This entire paragraph is very random in the reading, and seems very strange and sudden, a thing that draws out of it, fyi.)
“Hey chief!” Max shouted, waving from a few feet away. Sean raised his battered farming hat and smiled. He wore a white linen tunic with a brown belt that held his sheath and basic supplies, a few pieces of flint and knives being visible. (Why? a farmer’s hat, with knives and a sword or dagger? Not very likely, in medieval times.)
“Max, how’s it going? Are you going to the lesson today?” He asked as he eyed the butternut squash stand, searching for the ripest one the market had to offer.

OMG!! Yes! We finally figured out who this ‘Noah’ character is. I still say he is a bit shady… though the story is very confusing because you post random parts, or so it seems. lol. Hes the teacher, right? Hmmmmm….. I don’t like him. Nope, I don’t. And what is with this class? Its… strange.

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